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OH MY BROTHER DO YOU THINK YOUR LIFE SO SWEET. THAT YOU WOULD LIVE AT ANY PRICE. DOES YOUR MERE EXISTENCE BALANCE, OR CAN IT BE THAT YOU FEAR THE GRAVE ENOUGH TO LIVE HERE NOW WITHOUT LOVE.

OH MY BROTHER BE IT BETTER SAID, WHEN YOU ARE GONE AND NO TEARS ARE SHED. WAS YOUR LIFE WORTH LIVING THEN IF YOU NO WIFE OR CHILD TO SPEND EVEN ONE MOMENT WITH A BROKEN HEART.

OH MY BROTHER NO FLOWERS WILL BE SEEN UPON THE GROUND. WHERE BURIED DEEP BENEATH ITS COLD YOU LIE. NEVER KNOWING THE MANY FACES OF LOVE YOU HAVE LET PASS YOU BY.

Sounds as if your opinion of your brother is one that shows he could use some reflection of his inner self and then on how he is perceived to the world. Good job

Wally III

Comment Written 26-Sep-2005 by CYRANOGATOR

Hmmm...I liked this one. It depressed me...maybe I was depressed already...probably, but whatever.
Peace and stuff,
Trip

Comment Written 26-Sep-2005 by Tripping Hippy

The point you are seeking is understood in this and I like it okay, I found that a few words are missing here and there that throws the flow aff a touch but it's good work. Also you get the point across with the caps. mheflin

Comment Written 26-Sep-2005 by mheflin

 

 

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