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When you let your dreams for your life become your reality, then wake up to the fact that it is just a dream.

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Let me press my lips upon your brow,
for I must journey away from you now.

For this I must confess, you speak the
truth when you say I live my days in but
a dream.

Yet if despair should overcome in the
rise or setting sun within my vision, does
this mean all is gone.

Is all that we imagine just a vision within
a vision.

I stand alone against the roar as the waves
torment the shore and hold within my hand grains
of this pure white sand.

How they swiftly seep through my fingers to the
deep. While the pounding waves reflect the whaling
deep, deep within my soul.

For Oh, my darling I can not hold them within my
grasp, can not save even one from the ripping waves
that have torn at the very fabric of this weary soul.

Is all that we imagine just a vision within a vision.

This is a sad poem which conveys an air of hopelessness and despair to the reader. It contains some great imagery, for example, "the pounding waves reflect the wailing." Not WHALING as that has a totally different meaning lol.

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by Wendyanne


Now this is a great poem and I really like it I hope there are more of your work that you do here. I encrourage you to keep on writing and it's very detailed. You're a great poet and you'll do good, and good luck with your poems.

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by True_Writer2005

 


This is a very wonderful poem. Well written and portrayed. Good word form and usage. Great free form flow of verse. Wonderful visuals and imagery Very good read. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Thank you for sharing. Sharon

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by sharon fallis

Hello ladywolf4magic

This was an interesting perspective. i read it through several times. It held a special meaning for me because i am 50 and at the point in life of determining whatis rel and whatare dreams.

Good job.

Best Regards,
Mark

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by IamSpook

 

Enjoyed.
For me the poem picks up pace when you go into detail about the grains of sand, and from there, describing how you struggle to hold it.
One typo = "whaling" should be wailing,
Nicely done.
-dragonpoe

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by dragonpoe

It feels that way at times. Seen life as a nightmare and couldn't tell the difference if i was asleep or awake. But what is the difference. You really made me thinnk in this one. I have been enlightened as well and that also made me feel as if i was just a dreamer. It was beautiful.Guess it is what it is and how we choose to handle things. Nice poem.

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by zack(torturedjester)

Perchance truth and innocence lay silently within such words as these, waiting to be released by the magic of a poet's dream. A touching and sad poem dealing with the loss not only of one's dream but all the things that are connected with having dreamed. This is a deep piece and it struggles with the feeling of helplessness and uncertainty.

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by EmileJP

this poem had me glued to the screen
this was written a degree of emotion
as I felt all of your words
thank you for sharing this wonderful work of art... John

Comment Written 07-Oct-2005 by kingsland

 

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